I wept, positively wept, while reading that thread, I was LOLling so hard. I had to stop in the middle because it just hurt. Toksik, you were so earnest, and kind.
I think my favorite (as we speak spell it here in God's Country) line was this precious gem:
Description sets the pace for a decent story and even more decent dialogue. I learned this in European Writing Linguistics, a class at NC State college in Raleigh, NC, which i attended for four years. If i'm wrong, then i suppose you'd better write them and tell them that they gave me top marks for that class for the wrong reasons, eh? LOL.
But, really, it's so hard to choose. |
