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Please be a doll, and critique my Cannonball from X-Men redesign

 
  

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Jack Denfeld
12:14 / 02.06.04
I wanted to get away from all the military gear and straps and holster and shoulder pads and stuff, and keep a classic X-Men uniform design. I've also given him cool sunglasses. And I've given him an actual cannonball for a hand. Let me know what you think.
 
 
Lord Morgue
12:36 / 02.06.04
Beats Liefeld.

Could you draw Squirrel Girl?
 
 
Bizunth Again
14:22 / 02.06.04
Having no ears will make him considerably more aerodynamic. You get 7/10 and a smiley face sticker.
 
 
Matthew Fluxington
14:29 / 02.06.04
That's a lot better than the new Alan Davis design. I am being 100% sincere about this, too. I love the "cannonball for a hand" thing.
 
 
Jack Denfeld
15:38 / 02.06.04
Thanks everyone. I figured he could fly and then smash the bad guys with his cannonball hand.
 
 
Yotsuba & Benjamin!
16:06 / 02.06.04
You're Napoleon Dynamite, aren't you.

I scared people at work, I laughed so hard.
 
 
Quimper
16:25 / 02.06.04
This rocks like nothing else.
 
 
Spyder Todd 2008
18:31 / 02.06.04
I still think Cannonball should change his name to Jet-Ass...
 
 
Uncle Batman
19:05 / 02.06.04
Maybe a bit more cross-hatching might improve the 'realism' of the drawing.
 
 
cube needs to get out more
19:05 / 02.06.04
Hey, he's got an X on his chest. You should call him something kewl like "The X-Man!"
 
 
Spyder Todd 2008
20:20 / 02.06.04
I always liked X-Man... A mutant shaman who exists to protect his universe and specesis from both exterior and interior threats...
 
 
Quimper
21:20 / 02.06.04
If you look closely, you see that the cannonball hand was an afterthought. It's clearly covering up Sam's previously normal, admittedly boring flesh hand. Just shows that art doesn't come all at once in one big epiphany. It's a process.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
22:11 / 02.06.04
Anyone who thinks Liefeld was bad is driving blind. Liefeld was a visionary--ahead of his time. In the future, everyone will draw like an 8 year old Frank Miller.

I think it's okay if he just wears a cannonball on his hand--this "secondary mutation" thing is kind of lame.

Mike Robot, you should make Cannonball racist.
 
 
MJ-12
22:16 / 02.06.04
He's from the south, so that's obviously a given.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
22:23 / 02.06.04
Exactly. And it makes him more human, you know? Because, like, why should all the superheroes be all perfect all the time? Don't they have flaws and personality defects, too?
 
 
cube needs to get out more
23:33 / 02.06.04
NO! MAN! You should give him a sidekick, and, like, kill him OFF!
He, could, like, be, DeadDXbOY-BAll!
 
 
Quimper
23:39 / 02.06.04
"Because, like, why should all the superheroes be all perfect all the time? Don't they have flaws and personality defects, too?

Dude! Someone should tell Stan Lee that!

I just did a drawing of Husk as a giant cob of corn. I don't know if I should post it or not though.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
23:40 / 02.06.04
Dude. Xavier assigns him the sidekick, because it's like this totally troubled kid from the same state as Sam (Kennahorgia or something? I forget), but the problem is that this kid is totally black and Sam has a lot of trouble relating to him. And then he gets killed and Sam feels bad about it. Pathos, man, pathos!

Actually this sounds like too a plausible Chuck Austen storyline and I'm sorry I brought it up because it's making me sad.

Mike Robot, will you make a new costume for me? I am a mutant cat and also a robot.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
23:42 / 02.06.04
I mean a telepath.
 
 
Jack Fear
01:01 / 03.06.04
Surrrrrrrrrrrre you do.

I'm wise to your wily robot ways, F.R.O.T.T.E.R.
 
 
Alex Thoth
01:10 / 03.06.04
HAH, man, this is the funny shit I've seen all week.
 
 
The Natural Way
01:26 / 03.06.04
This is fantastic stuff, guy. Classic. I do feel he needs more guns, though (perhaps a gun for a head would be good?). Add more guns. I think some of them should be firing cannonball grenades (perhaps the gun-head?).

Some of the grenades should be exploding.

I tell you, between this awesome new design and DavidXBrunt, Barbelith's looking real good.

XBRUNT!!
 
 
Grandma loves children
(prev. Old dear. Gin. Problems)
02:35 / 03.06.04
Mike, this is money, man, this is so... fucking... money.
 
 
cube needs to get out more
03:09 / 03.06.04
That's it! In order to pursue his mutant lifestyle he could have like loads of money.
or whatever.
Or maybe he keeps bees. Yeah. He's covered in bees.
 
 
A Haus of Minions
08:51 / 03.06.04
Dude, a cannon instead of a head. He puts the cannonball intohis head cannon, fires it (blindly, unfortunately), and then makes it come back by... I don't know. Mentesis or something. Yeah!

And he's a billionaire industrialist. LIke Bruce Wayne. But with a cannon for a head.
 
 
Jack Denfeld
09:40 / 03.06.04
 
 
Lord Morgue
12:12 / 03.06.04
Does the X count as one big cross-hatch?
 
 
Rex Feral
13:09 / 03.06.04
Can I just say I really like the way Cannonball is waving? Great expressive gesture. I saw that and thought, this is one of the good guys, y'know? This makes his problems being able to relate across racial barriers all the more tragic. Social commentary, dude. Who said comics are for kids?
 
 
Quimper
15:51 / 03.06.04
Nimrod is THE quintessential X-Villian for one reason and one reason only....

No other has three fingers on one hand and four on the other! FEAR HIM!
 
 
osymandus
15:58 / 03.06.04
I saw the Nimrod picture and physically shat myself , god that is fear itself.

As for cannonball, i mean what more can the english language give to summerise this personification of art.

Oh and make him a self impregnating hermaprodite for real pathos (is he still immortal ?)
 
 
Catjerome
16:13 / 03.06.04
The costume needs thigh pouches. Those are classy.
 
 
8===>Q: alyn
16:47 / 03.06.04
(counts fingers)
 
 
gridley
17:45 / 03.06.04
"Don't make me use my extra finger, Jean Grey!"

"Uhhh... ok."

"I mean it! You sooooo do not want me using my extra finger on you!"

"Fair enough."

"I call it Lucky #7..."
 
 
Boboss
19:28 / 03.06.04
Did you submit your designs to Epic?
 
 
Mr Tricks
21:02 / 03.06.04
if cannon ball shoots his cannonball hand from his cannon head then he should be able to regrow a new one. it's sort of like a healing factor but with a cannon ball hand.

and as for NIMROD... shouldn't that extra finger be for pulling?
 
  

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